OK I've finally given into popular demand and can let you listen to one of my songs, it's called 'The Drumming Of The Rain' - listen to it here:
http://www.mediamax.com/alexadams1/Links/60A958715C
P.s. when I say popular demand, what I actually mean is that my sister told me to post it
Not bad, some constructive critisism....
You should start the track with the chords that you bring in at 10sec instead of the drum line. Bring the drum line in more gently, give the listener chance to get into the track. You bring a break in way too early at just 44 secs.
You have too many drum styles and fills in there, pick a rhythm and stick with it. Use high hats and fills to accentuate changes in the track, otherwise your drum line will sound too random.
It really sounds like its going somewhere at 1.05, but then looses it again at 1.23. It's going great guns at 2.05, but gets buggered up by a random drumming change at 2.13
Nice samples, what software are you using?